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the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. YrAm

Given is a chart illustrating the proportion of families’ owning and renting houses in England and Wales from 1918 and 2011. It is evident from the information supplied that owing and renting showed opposite trends with a sharp increase in ownership and an inverse decline in renting. Moreover, by the end of the period, overall ownership had overtaken renting by a wide margin. As shown by the figure, decreasing from approximately 78% in 1918 to about 69% in 1939, the proportion of households in rented accommodation remained stable until 1953. The trend continued to decline steadily by almost 20% until 1971, reached 50%. In contrast, the percentage of families in owned houses climbed significantly from 20% in 1918 to just over 30% in 1939 and remained unchanged until 1953, before becoming equal with rental in 1971. Looking at the data, it is clear that the same trend continued for both rental and ownership. The trend for ownership rose to just under 70% until 2001 before falling gradually to 65% in 2011, while rental went down dramatically to about 31% until 2001 and then witnessed a slight increase to 35% by the end of the period.

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 is a chart illustrating the proportion of families’ owning and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
renting
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houses
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from 1918 and 2011
.

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renting
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ownership
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renting
. Moreover
, by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period, overall
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ownership
 had overtaken You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
renting
 by a wide margin.

As shown by the figure, decreasing from approximately 78% in 1918 to about 69% in 1939, the proportion of households in rented accommodation remained stable until 1953. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdirectiontendencymovement
trend
 continued to decline steadily
 by almost 20% until 1971, reached 50%. In contrast
, the percentage of families in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
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houses
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before
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clear
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trend
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ownership
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdirectiontendencymovement
trend
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ownership
 rose to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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before
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 to 65% in 2011, while rental went down dramatically
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 of the period. 