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The enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.

The enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. 0q8B

the line graph illustrates the number of international and local students enrolling in Australian university from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the number of overseas students enrolling in Australian universities increased dramatically over the ten years, while that of local students always higher than international ones. In 2001, the total enrollment of international students was far less than that of local students, which was around 20, 000 students and 40, 000 students, respectively. Moreover, the commencing enrollment of local students was less than half of the total students. From 2001 to 2007, the total of local students climbed and reached a peak of 600, 000 students in 2007, while the new enrollments fluctuated around 200, 000 students. The total of local students' enrollment remained unchanged from 2007 to 2010. In terms of international students, in 2001, only 10, 000 students enrolled on Australian universities which was half of the total number. The figure sau a gradual increase in the next ten years to reach a peak of 40, 000 students contributing to the rocket in the total number of overseas students to 80, 000 in 2010. From 2001 to 2010, the total of internationally students' admissions to Australian universities grew considerably and peaked 80, 000 in 2010. Similarily, the commencing enrollment of overseas students increased steadily from 18, 000 to 42, 000. As for local students, the number of new enrollments went up to about 23, 000 students in 2002 before decreasing and fluctuating around 20, 000 in the remaining period. The total number of local students in Australian universities increased by 20, 000 to reach 60, 000 students from 2001 to 2006 and remained stable for the last 4 years.

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