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Energy used in an average Australian household and greenhouse gas energy use

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The first pie chart provides energy consumption in percentage in an average Australian household where as the second pie chart represents the greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy consumption of the Australian households. One of the striking feature observed, is the energy used for heating purposes constituting of almost 50% of the total spectrum and cooling purpose being the least. On the other hand the greenhouse gas emission is maximum from water heating and minimum from cooling. It is clearly seen from the first pie chart, the energy used via heating is the most which is 42% of the total consumption. Water heating sums up to nearly one third that is 30%. 15% usage coming from other appliances. Refrigeration, lighting and cooling eats up a minimum portion of 7%, 4% and 2% respectively. When it comes to greenhouse gas emissions water heating encapsulate almost a third of the share. 28% of the total emission comes from other appliances. Heating constitute 15% of entire emissions. Refrigeration, lightning and cooling accounts 14%, 8% and 3% respectively.

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