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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map indicates of the city of Brandfield City planners have made up their mind to build a new area and two sites S1 and S2. First of all, there is a housing Estate is located in S1 divided by a road and a Golf Centre and park area. There is a Railway between the housing Estate and the Golf Centre and park. In the middle of the map, we see there is a City Centre located by the Road and the Railway which is being divided by a River. Finally, there is an Industrial Estate in the South-East side of the Brandfield City is being touched by a road. Overall, both of the side are great for building new areas. However, S1 area has more newly places are about to build than S2 area.

The map indicates of the city of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
 City planners have made up their mind to build a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and two sites S1 and S2.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, there is a housing Estate is located
 in S1 divided by a road and a Golf Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 and park You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. There is a Railway between the housing Estate and the Golf Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 and park. In the middle of the map, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 there is a City Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
 located by the Road and the Railway which is being divided
 by a River. Finally
, there is an Industrial Estate in the South-East side of the Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
 City is being touched
 by a road.

Overall
, both of the side are great for building new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. However
, S1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has more newly
 places are about to build than S2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 

IELTS academic Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

135 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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