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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. A9eM
The map indicates of the city of Brandfield City planners have made up their mind to build a new area and two sites S1 and S2. First of all, there is a housing Estate is located in S1 divided by a road and a Golf Centre and park area. There is a Railway between the housing Estate and the Golf Centre and park. In the middle of the map, we see there is a City Centre located by the Road and the Railway which is being divided by a River. Finally, there is an Industrial Estate in the South-East side of the Brandfield City is being touched by a road. Overall, both of the side are great for building new areas. However, S1 area has more newly places are about to build than S2 area.
The map indicates of the city of
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Brandfield
City planners have made up their mind to build a new
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area
and two sites S1 and S2.

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First of all
, there is a housing Estate
is located
in S1 divided by a road and a Golf
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Centre
and park
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area
. There is a Railway between the housing Estate and the Golf
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Centre
and park. In the middle of the map, we
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see
there is a City
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Centre
located by the Road and the Railway which is
being divided
by a River.
Finally
, there is an Industrial Estate in the South-East side of the
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Brandfield
City is
being touched
by a road.

Overall
, both of the side are great for building new
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areas
.
However
, S1
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area
has more
newly
places are about to build than S2
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area
.
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IELTS academic Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
135 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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