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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the amount of revenue and expenditures in 2016 and for a children’s charity in the USA. Calibration of date is done in percentage. Overall, the total amount of income was just enough to cover the expenditures. Moreover, donated food made the highest share in total income while the maximum money spent on program service. To begin with, donated food provided the most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. Similarly, with regard to expenditures, program services, calculated for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95. 8%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10. 4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2. 2%. on the other hand, investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0. 8% combined. There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, with a slight difference both accounting for 2. 6% and 1. 6% respectively.
The pie charts
show
the amount of
revenue
and
expenditures
in 2016 and for a children’s charity in the USA. Calibration of date
is done
in percentage.

Overall
, the total amount of
income
was
just
enough
to cover the
expenditures
.
Moreover
, donated food made the highest share in total
income
while the maximum money spent on program service.

To
begin
with, donated food provided the most of the
revenue
for the charity, at 86%.
Similarly
, with regard to
expenditures
, program services, calculated for
nearly
all of the
outgoings, at 95. 8%. The
other
categories were much smaller. Community contributions were the second largest
revenue
source, brought in 10. 4% of
overall
income
, and this
was followed
by program
revenue
, at 2. 2%.
on
the
other
hand, investment
income
,
government
grants, and
other
income
were
very
small
sources of
revenue
, accounting for
only
0. 8% combined.

There were
only
two
other
expenditure
items, fundraising and management and general, with a slight difference both accounting for 2. 6% and 1. 6%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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