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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The flow chart shows the way in which electricity is generated through heat power. It is a linear man-made process. Overall, there are 5 stages in the whole electricity-producing process, beginning with the collection of cold water and ending with the supply of electricity to the transformer. To begin, the cold water is pumped down to 4. 5 km into the injection well. This water is then passed through the hot rocks in a geothermal zone. Next, this water goes through the production well. Then, the hot water is pumped up into the condenser where a liquid is transformed into steam. After this, the steam pushes the turbine to get started. In the next stage, a generator is powered by a turbine, and electricity is produced. In the last stage, electricity is supplied to the electric grid.
The flow chart
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the way in which
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electricity
is generated
through heat power. It is a linear
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man
-made process.

Overall
, there are 5 stages in the whole electricity-producing process, beginning with the collection of
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cold
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water
and ending with the supply of
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electricity
to the transformer.

To
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begin
, the
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cold
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water
is pumped
down to 4. 5 km into the injection well. This
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water
is then passed through the hot rocks in a geothermal zone.
Next
, this
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water
goes through the production well. Then, the hot
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water
is pumped
up into the condenser where a liquid
is transformed
into steam.

After this, the steam pushes the turbine to
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get
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started
. In the
next
stage, a generator
is powered
by a turbine, and
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electricity
is produced
. In the last stage,
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electricity
is supplied
to the electric grid.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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