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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol

The graph shows how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol, according to their income and social status. As it can been from the graph, the general trend of amount of petrol spent in the United States starts with a high rate within the poorest social status, then it decreases when facing middle income and it goes up again when it comes to the richest income. Instead, the general trend of the UK is pretty low within the poorest income, while it increases in the middle income, reaching a peak of almost 4% in the richest part of the graph. Moreover, Americans spend more in petrol than British people, no matter what social status they come from nor their income, reaching a peak of more than 5% when it comes to the poorest income. However, both British and American people spend the same amount of petrol when talking about middle and the richest incomes. In fact, in these cases, we can see that the two lines match together, staying lower than 4%. In conclusion, both in the US and in the UK, people tend to spend quite a lot when it comes to middle and richest income, whereas the rates remain low within the poorest people.
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spent in the United States
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poorest
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income
, while it increases in the
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middle
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income
, reaching a peak of almost 4% in the
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part of the graph.

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, Americans
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more in
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than British
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, no matter what social status they
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, reaching a peak of more than 5% when it
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income.

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the same amount of
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that the two lines match together, staying lower than 4%.

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, both in the US and in the UK,
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol

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