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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The line graph gives information about recycling rate your of 1982 to 2010. The four different types of material describe a graph and unit is per cent. overall, materials is four types first is paper and cardboard, second is glass container and last two is aluminium cans for plastics. After a use all product throughout in garbage bin. the high value of recycling is paper and cardboard. start 1982 of 60 per cent in 1992 public demand is very high as well as 2010 the recycling is 70 per cent. Secondly, glass containers types garbage is started recycling in 1982 value is 50 per cent, when after 1988 minor recycling showing lower value is 40 per cent. In conclude, the all demand is very high in country. but only aluminium and plastic are not ready for recycling in 1982. It's means the country are you using only one time all the products.

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