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This bar chart demonstrates the proportion of owned and rented houses between all available residental units in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

This bar chart demonstrates the proportion of owned and rented houses between all available residental units in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Percentage numbers are reported by a decade interval in the mentioned period. Overall, English and Wales people tend to own houses more frequently recently in comparison to 1918. In terms of owned accomodation, merely less than a quarter of all houses were owned in 1918. Despite slight fluctuations, number of households increased steady reached a plateau by 2001. In fact 2001 was the peak for the number of homes bought by people in England and Wales with dedicating an approximately 70% share of the total houses. On the other hand, rented houses experienced a significant drop over the last 80 years, which shrank it's quota from more than three-forth of the all homes to a bit more than 30% in 2001. However, there is a sign of growth in rented houses percentage in England and Wales and it seems people in these regions tend to opt rented houses. Similarly, There is a decrease in number of residents of owned houses from around 70% to less than 65% in 2001 and 2011 respectively.
This bar chart demonstrates the proportion of
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and rented
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houses
between all available
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units in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Percentage
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numbers
are reported
by a decade interval in the mentioned period.
Overall
, English and Wales
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people
tend to
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own
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houses
more
frequently
recently
in comparison
to 1918.

In terms of
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accomodation
,
merely
less than a quarter of all
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houses
were
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owned
in 1918. Despite slight fluctuations,
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number
of households increased steady reached a plateau by 2001. In fact 2001 was the peak for the
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number
of homes
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bought
by
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people
in England and Wales with dedicating an approximately 70% share of the total
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houses
.

On the other hand
, rented
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houses
experienced a significant drop over the last 80 years, which shrank
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it's
quota from more than three-forth of the all homes to a bit more than 30% in 2001.
However
, there is a
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sign
of growth in rented
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houses
percentage in England and
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Wales and
it seems
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people
in these regions tend to opt rented
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houses
.
Similarly
, There is a decrease in
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number
of residents of
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owned
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houses
from around 70% to less than 65% in 2001 and 2011
respectively
.
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IELTS academic This bar chart demonstrates the proportion of owned and rented houses between all available residental units in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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