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The pie chart show the nutritional consistency of two dinners.

The pie chart show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. p5Le3
The proportion of existence of five different types of nutrients present in two different dishes is depicted by two circular chart. To commence with, in medium baked potatoes, carbohydrate had highest contribution of 35 % in meal. The second majority with the quarter in percentage was protein while glucose and other nutrients and equal number of figure for providing nutrients that was 15% in medium baked potatoes. At last, saturated fat had only 10 % presence as a nutrient. Moving towards the further information, in macaroni, carbohydrate Hai majority in a dinner food with the percentile of 52. However, protein and glucose add 11 % of consistency. Other nutrients included in macaroni was 15% whereas saturated fat was 21 % with second province. Overall, it is crystal clear that in both food carbohydrates had majorly present whilst other nutrients had low percentage.
The proportion of existence of five
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nutrients
present in two
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is depicted
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. To commence with, in medium baked potatoes, carbohydrate had
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highest
contribution of 35 % in meal. The second majority with the quarter in percentage was protein while glucose and other
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nutrients
and equal number of figure for providing
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nutrients
that was 15% in medium baked potatoes. At last, saturated
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fat
had
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only
10 % presence as a
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nutrient
. Moving towards the
further
information, in macaroni, carbohydrate
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Hai
majority in a dinner food with the percentile of 52.
However
, protein and glucose
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add
11 % of consistency. Other
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nutrients
included in macaroni was 15% whereas saturated
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fat
was 21 % with second province.
Overall
, it is crystal
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clear
that in both food carbohydrates had
majorly
present whilst other
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nutrients
had low percentage.
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IELTS academic The pie chart show the nutritional consistency of two dinners.

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