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The bar graph show number of car journey into the city centre done by residents and non residents

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The bon graph depicts information regarding the count of Car journey into the city centre done by citizens and mon-citizens in 1996 to 2005. Sh an overview, the maximum can jowiney into the city centrie done by viesidents in various years whereas the minimum car journey was done by mon- resident! in the following years. St can be clearly seen that in 1996, the COM journey by residents was under 10000 aho mon- Jesidents showed the overage mumber of journey was half of the residents Moreover, in 1997, car journey by mon-resident: mome than 6000, and Mesidents showed mearly 9000 In addition, in 1998, the car jourtney done Mesidents was higher than non viesidents ww around 10000 and Slightly more than 6000. In 1999, COM Journey made by Mendents 83 I thousand more than, mon-residents was Moving Pwither, in 2000, approximatally 8000 journeys Nio Imon nesident! and 5000 was made by viesidents. Furthermes in 2001 and 2002 both Mendents and mon-Menden! ! did equal jou heys in these yeart 18h 2003 the journey made thowandy moke than Beide thies in 2005 through was 8000 and Sooo. Mesidents mon- citizens way Looo and 3000. the car Jouthey made by man Ciszen 83 highest than Mesident! 83 5000 4000 and
The
bon
graph depicts information regarding the count of

Car
journey
into the city
centre
done by citizens and
mon-citizens
in 1996 to 2005.

Sh an overview, the maximum can
jowiney
into the city
centrie
done by
viesidents
in various years whereas

the
minimum car
journey
was done
by
mon
- resident!

in
the following years.

St can be
clearly
seen
that in 1996, the COM
journey
by

residents
was
under 10000
aho
mon
-
Jesidents
showed


the overage
mumber
of
journey
was half of the residents

Moreover
, in 1997, car
journey
by
mon-resident
:

mome
than 6000, and
Mesidents
showed
mearly
9000

In addition
, in 1998, the car
jourtney
done

Mesidents


was higher than non
viesidents
ww
around 10000

and

Slightly
more than 6000. In 1999, COM
Journey
made
by


Mendents
83 I
thousand
more than,
mon-residents


was

Moving
Pwither
, in 2000,
approximatally
8000
journeys
Nio


Imon
nesident
!
and


5000

was
made by
viesidents
.
Furthermes


in
2001 and 2002 both
Mendents
and
mon-Menden
! !

did
equal
jou
heys
in these
yeart


18h 2003 the
journey
made

thowandy
moke
than

Beide
thies
in 2005

through

was

8000 and
Sooo
.

Mesidents


mon
- citizens way
Looo
and 3000.

the


car
Jouthey
made by
man


Ciszen
83
highest
than
Mesident
! 83

5000

4000 and
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