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The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in Clean Energy from 2008 to 2015 summarise the information and prepare a report

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The bar graph demonstrates the expanse of UK investing in Clean Energy from the year 2008 to 2015. It can be clearly seen from the bar graph that in the year 2008 you get started investing around 3 billion pound in wind energy smart Technologies and others hence in 2009-10 and 11 the amount of money invested in energy source by UK was almost similar and that was on an average around it 8 billion pound but from 2010 UK also started investing in solar energy also surprisingly in 2011 2012 and 2013 money spent on solar was to be same and that was around 3 billion pound. However the total amount spent in 2013 on all the energy sources was to be approximately 9 billion pound for the more in 2014 more money was invested in solar and wind and the overall investment was found to be 12 billion pound on the contrary the Paramount of money invested in energy sources was 15 million pound in the year 2015 and in the same year the maximum money was spent on wind energy source. Overall all the maximum amount invested was in 2015 but the maximal money spent on 16 was only in the year 2014
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by UK was almost similar and that was on an average around it 8
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in Clean Energy from 2008 to 2015

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