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The chart illustrates how many people attendance at entertainment venues in 2009 wh, ch related to three topics (sports, theme parks, cinemas).

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The chart illustrates how many people attendance at entertainment venues in 2009 wh, ch related to three topics (sports, theme parks, cinemas). The table is about how much admission price in two conditions which related to seven different events in the same year. With regards to the attendance, people chose cinemas significantly more than other options (around 1050 thousands). Theme Parks had under the 400 thousand attendance. The lowest participation is sports which means about 150 thousand people at entertainment area. In terms of entry cost, the most expensive event was Football Game-AFL which at $75 for one ticket and $298 for family ticket (included 4 people). In the Football Games, NRU was the cheapest one. Theme Parks were also as much as expensive such as Football Games (about $70, $210 respectively with options). Basketball Game and Cricket Game were more suitable to choose according to first four events. Their prices were $34, $24 for one ticket and $135, $80 for family ticket respectively. The most economical way to participate was cinema ($15 for 1 ticket and $55 for family ticket). Overall, cinema was the most affordable way at entertainment venues and this situation affected attendance so the number of attendance to cinemas reached the highest population in that year.

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