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The map shows the information about the change that are occured in an island after doing renovation work over there

The map shows the information about the change that are occured in an island after doing renovation work over there Wm5Dq
The given maps illustration the information about the change that are occured in an island after doing renovation work over there Overall, it is crystal clear that most of the facilities are provided in the hundred meter area by construsting restorent, houses and a pier. To begin with, Looking at the first picture of map before construction, one beach was west side of the map. Some trees was in the east side of the map. Many facilities did not available in the before map. Other trees was in the west side of the map. One sea was the south derection in the map, one sea was northside of the map. Moreover, after the map facilities are available in the 100 meters area. West area beach is use for swimming create the accommodation area in the south side around the trees area attach with beach and reception through the footpath. Reception is attach the pier by vehicle track west sea is use for boting. Central area of the map make many accommodation. More changes are the after map in the 100 maters. Many features are the after map than before map.
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illustration the information about the
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change
that are
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occured
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in an island
after doing renovation work over there
Overall
, it is crystal
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that most of the facilities
are provided
in the
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hundred meter
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before
construction, one beach was west side of the
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map
.
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Some
trees
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.
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Many
facilities did not available in the
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before
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map
. Other trees was in the west side of the
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map
. One sea was the south
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derection
in the
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map
, one sea was
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northside
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facilities are available in the 100 meters
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. West
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beach is
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for swimming create the accommodation
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area
in the south side around the
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trees
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attach with beach and reception through the footpath. Reception is
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attach
the pier by vehicle
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west sea is
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for
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many accommodation
. More
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changes
are the after
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map
in the 100 maters.
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features are the after
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than
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IELTS academic The map shows the information about the change that are occured in an island after doing renovation work over there

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5.0
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