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The two pie charts illustrate the average revenue sources and the corresponding expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in the year of 2016

The two pie charts illustrate the average revenue sources and the corresponding expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in the year of 2016 k65jN

The two pie charts illustrate the average revenue sources and the corresponding expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in the year of 2016. The revenue sources for the organisation are food donation, community contributions, program revenue, investment income, government grants and other income options available. The expenditure is divided into three major parts as program services, fundraising and management and general. The charity recorded a net profit of $336684 in 2016. Food donation is the major source of income as opposed to Program services accounting for the major expenditure of the charity firm. The contribution of food donation as a revenue source is 86. 6% followed by Community contribution (16. 4%) and Program Revenue(2. 2%). Both the Investment Income and Government Grants brought into. 2% while Other Income Sources mark. 4% of the revenue sources. With regards to the annual expenditure in 2016, the Program Services recorded higher expenditure (95. 8%) while fundraising and Management & General mark 2. 6% and 1. 6% respectively.

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 of a children’s charity in the USA in the year of 2016. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
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expenditure
 of the charity firm.

The contribution of food donation as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalaryreturnwealthcreditpayreceipt
revenue
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Program
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