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THE PIE CHART SHOW HOW COMMUTERS FROM A CITY IN THE UK PREFERRED TO TRAVEL TO WORK IN 2020.

THE PIE CHART SHOW HOW COMMUTERS FROM A CITY IN THE UK PREFERRED TO TRAVEL TO WORK IN 2020. 75RE5
THE GIVEN PIE CHART DEMONSTRATES PASSENGERS FROM THE UNITED KINGDOM CITIES PREFERRED TO VISIT OR WORK BY A GREAT NUMBER OF TRANSPORTS DURING THE PERIOD 2020. OVERALL, IT IS CLEARLY SEEN IN THE PIE CHART MAJORITY OF UK VISITORS ARE CHOSE TO WORK BY CAR WHILE OTHER TRANSPORTS ARE NOT PREFERABLE FOR PEOPLE. ALTHOUGH IN 2020, A SIGNIFICANT NUMBER OF COMMUTERS ARE MADE UP 33. 2% PERCENT OF CARS, THEY FOUND THAT A CAR ARE MORE AFFORDABLE FOR WORKERS DAILY LIFE. HOWEVER, INDIVIDUALS WHO LIVE IN THE UK HAD NOT USED BIKES. IN TERMS OF METRO UK INDIVIDUALS USED THIS TRANSPORT MOST 26. 3%, WHEREAS TRAIN WAS UNDOUBTEDLY SMALLEST18. 1% RESPECTIVELY. NEVERTHELESS, OTHER TRANSPORT WHICH WAS BUS, CITIZENS HAD NOT FASCINATED TO USE IT.
THE
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GIVEN
PIE CHART DEMONSTRATES PASSENGERS FROM THE
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UNITED KINGDOM
CITIES PREFERRED TO VISIT OR WORK BY A GREAT NUMBER OF
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TRANSPORTS
DURING THE PERIOD 2020.
OVERALL
, IT IS
CLEARLY
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SEEN
IN THE PIE CHART MAJORITY OF UK VISITORS ARE
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CHOSE
TO WORK BY CAR WHILE OTHER
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TRANSPORTS
ARE NOT PREFERABLE FOR
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PEOPLE
. ALTHOUGH IN 2020, A SIGNIFICANT NUMBER OF COMMUTERS
ARE MADE
UP 33. 2% PERCENT OF CARS, THEY FOUND THAT A CAR ARE MORE AFFORDABLE FOR WORKERS DAILY LIFE.
HOWEVER
, INDIVIDUALS WHO
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LIVE
IN THE UK HAD NOT
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USED
BIKES. IN TERMS OF METRO UK INDIVIDUALS
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USED
THIS
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TRANSPORT
MOST 26. 3%, WHEREAS TRAIN WAS
UNDOUBTEDLY
SMALLEST18. 1%
RESPECTIVELY
.
NEVERTHELESS
, OTHER
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TRANSPORT
WHICH WAS BUS, CITIZENS HAD NOT FASCINATED TO
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USE
IT.

IELTS academic THE PIE CHART SHOW HOW COMMUTERS FROM A CITY IN THE UK PREFERRED TO TRAVEL TO WORK IN 2020.

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124 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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