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The pie chart show agriculture land becomes less productive and affect regions write 150 words and make comparisons where ever relevant

The pie chart show agriculture land becomes less productive and affect regions write 150 words and make comparisons where ever relevant Y2Y05
The pie chart illustrates the important reasons why agriculture land becomes less productive and the table depicts how these affected three region (North America, Europe, Oceania)in the year 1990s. Units are measured in percentage. According to the pie chart, over-grazing have the highest percentage which is 35 %in causing land degradation whereas other shows the least percentage. Deforestation have 30 percent in land degradation as compared to over cultivation which was around 28 percent. It is clear from the table, in North America over cultivation have highest percent around 3. 3 whereas Deforestation have 0. 2. Moreover, Europe show highest percentage in deforestation activities on the contrary in Oceania over grazing show highest amount of land degradation which is around 11. 3%. Overall, in the pie chart deforestation shows highest percentage in comparison with table as it shows total highest land degradation is done by Europe which is around 23% as compared to other two regions.
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land
becomes less productive and the table depicts how these
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affected
three region (North America, Europe, Oceania)in the year 1990s. Units
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percentage
which is 35
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the least
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.
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Deforestation
have 30 percent in
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land
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degradation
as compared to over cultivation which was
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around
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from the table, in North America over cultivation have
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3. 3 whereas
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have 0. 2.
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, Europe
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land
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Overall
, in the pie chart
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deforestation
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shows
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total highest
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land
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is done
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23% as compared to other two regions.
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IELTS academic The pie chart show agriculture land becomes less productive and affect regions write 150 words and make comparisons where ever relevant

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