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the table blow shows the average rainfall in two cities.

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The chart shows the average amount of rainfall in two areas in every month. Unlike Blacksburg, Woodsville has higher level of rain, especially in Nov and Dec. In Woodsville, amount of rainfall has a drop during the 7 first months of year, and then increased. The average of rainfall declined from Jan to Jul. The minimum rainfall is 1mm in Jul. After this time, it rose significantly and went to maximum average in Nov, that 6mm was recorded. In the last month, Dec, it dipped slight to 5. 5. Blacksburg have less rainfall in a year than Woodsville. The most amount of rainfall is in Feb, that 4 inches was recorded. Rainfall decreased during next months, and Jul has minimum rate, 0. 01 inches, like other city. The average rainfall increase in autumn and went to 2. 5 inches in Dec. In general, the average rainfall in these city differ from each other considerably. Blacksburg has lower rate, especially in summer months. On the contrary of that, the rainfall in Woodsville went to 6 inches in Nov.
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, Dec, it dipped slight to 5. 5.

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