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In the future all cars, buses, trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger.

In the future all cars, buses, trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. jdxMw
It is reckoned that in the futural society, vehicle traffic such as cars, buses and trucks tend to be automatic. The mass level of the driverless makes that passengers will be the only person who sits inside these vehicles. There are certain advantages and disadvantages to this trend, however, I personally believe that the phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks. To begin, driverless vehicles will be less flexible than those that have drivers inside. To exemplify, in the same route, automatic cars will only follow the path indicated on the map, while the experimented chauffeurs will proactively approach some shortcuts that few people know, resulting in saving the amount of time for passengers. On the other side of the coin, despite the detriment mentioned above, I think the solution has more value. First of all, in past, there were many times that drivers consciously has drivered in danger areas to commit burglary, kidnapping or even murder. The driverless vehicles, which will just follow what was programmed and to be proven scientifically can assure safety for all passengers inside, will be a pragmatic remedy to tackle this problem. Furthermore, people will not waste time learning suspension because of the dense approach of driverless vehicles that will support them travel whereas they want without the knowledge of drive skill. Finally, the use of transportation is expected to thrust upon road safety thanks to the fact that nothing gets in their way to perfectly avoid traffic jams and accidents. In conclusion, there are sufficient grounds to acknowledge the view that there are a number of values and detriments to the advent of this phenomenon. It is my genuine belief that the trend can improve going forward, so people can actualise and concretice it in the not-too-distant future.
It
is reckoned
that in the
futural
society,
vehicle
traffic such as cars, buses and trucks tend to be automatic. The mass level of the driverless
makes
that passengers will be the
only
person who sits inside these
vehicles
. There are certain advantages and disadvantages to this trend,
however
, I
personally
believe that the phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks.

To
begin
, driverless
vehicles
will be less flexible than those that have drivers inside. To exemplify, in the same route, automatic cars will
only
follow the path indicated on the map, while the experimented chauffeurs will
proactively
approach
some
shortcuts that few
people
know, resulting in saving the amount of time for passengers.

On the other side of the coin, despite the detriment mentioned above, I
think
the solution has more value.
First of all
,
in past
, there were
many
times that drivers
consciously
has
drivered
in
danger
areas to commit burglary, kidnapping or even murder. The driverless
vehicles
, which will
just
follow what
was programmed
and to
be proven
scientifically
can assure safety for all passengers inside, will be a pragmatic remedy to tackle this problem.
Furthermore
,
people
will not waste time learning suspension
because
of the dense approach of driverless
vehicles
that will support them travel whereas they want without the knowledge of drive
skill
.
Finally
, the
use
of transportation is
expected
to thrust upon road safety thanks to the fact that nothing
gets
in their way to
perfectly
avoid traffic jams and accidents.

In conclusion
, there are sufficient grounds to acknowledge the view that there are a number of values and detriments to the advent of this phenomenon. It is my genuine belief that the trend can
improve
going forward,
so
people
can
actualise
and
concretice
it in the not-too-distant future.
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IELTS academic In the future all cars, buses, trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger.

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