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The given maps illustrate the developmental plan of a small town centre, Islip

The given maps illustrate the developmental plan of a small town centre, Islip 06o0B
The given maps illustrate the developmental plan of a small town centre, Islip using current and future map. Overall, currently Islip doesn't have bus station, car parking and way for pedestrians. Thus developed plan has those in a specific way. Because of the developmental plan town got its unique structure and arial view map shows clearly about it. Especially, the roadways improved to dual carriageway where motor vehicles can flow in subtle way. In addition, the countryside space has been used widely for the development. Motorways located around the town similar to ring shape. Previously Shops were located to the north and south parts of the main road but shops which located in the north replaced as shopping centre and main road modified into way only for pedestrians. Southern part of the town were still look like similar to the current map, School is in same location which in south west region of the town. like school, Park and housing also didn't faced much alterations and they are in south east and southern part of the town. New Bus station, car park and new housing are introduced in the northern part of the town.
The
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maps illustrate the developmental plan of a
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small
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town
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centre
,
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Islip
using
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current
and future map.

Overall
,
currently
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Islip
doesn't have bus station, car parking and way for pedestrians.
Thus
developed plan has those
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in a specific way
.
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Because
of the developmental plan
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town
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got
its unique structure and
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arial
view map
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shows
clearly
about it.

Especially
, the roadways
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improved
to dual carriageway where motor vehicles can flow in subtle way.
In addition
, the countryside space has been
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used
widely
for the development. Motorways located around the
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town
similar to ring shape. Previously Shops
were located
to the north and south
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parts
of the main road
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but
shops which located in the north replaced as shopping
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centre
and main road modified into way
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only
for pedestrians.

Southern
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part
of the
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town
were
still
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look
like similar to the
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current
map, School is in same location which in
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south west
region of the
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town
.
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like
school, Park and housing
also
didn't
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faced
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much
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alterations and
they are in
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south east
and southern
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part
of the
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town
. New Bus station, car park and new housing
are introduced
in the northern
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part
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town
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IELTS academic The given maps illustrate the developmental plan of a small town centre, Islip

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