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The pie chart reveals the information of spending money on different categories by citizens of two countries:UK and New Zealand between 1980and 2008.

The pie chart reveals the information of spending money on different categories by citizens of two countries: UK and New Zealand between 1980and 2008. 8danr

Overall, In 2008, the figure of UK people were inclined in leisure category as compared to 1980, whereas in New Zealand, households invest more money on food and drinks in 1980, however the proportion of people who spend money on transport was least in 2008. In UK, the percentage of households spend amount on food and drinks was 23%in 1980, while it was declined with the proportion of 13%in 2008. In 1980, 26% citizens involve their money on utility bills. In 2008, the figure of UK citizens who spend lavish money on utility bills was increased with 28% throughout the given period. Moreover, transport facility was least prefered by households with 15% in 1980, whilst the percentage of people expenditure in this category was dropped by 11%. People invest more money on leisure activity with 34%in 2003 instead of 1980. In addition, the figure of households was also increased in others category with 2% by 2008. In New Zealand, 3% households people was spend money on utility bills in the year 2008, whereas in pervious year(1980), the proportion of thesecategory was 27%. Moreover, in 1980, public invest amount on others activity was 9%, however the category of transport and free time activity was declined with 1%in 2008. Furthermore, in 1980, the percentage of people spending money was 29%in the category of food and drinks, whereas it was dropped by 4%in 2008.

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