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The bar chart illustrates the findings of a questionnaire about how often Australian citizens in five cities buy and drink coffee and tea.

The bar chart illustrates the findings of a questionnaire about how often Australian citizens in five cities buy and drink coffee and tea. jVddM

The bar chart illustrates the findings of a questionnaire about how often Australian citizens in five cities buy and drink coffee and tea. Overall, the percentages of citizens went to café in the last 4 weeks were highest in most of the surveyed cities except for Adelaide, whereas the figures for fresh coffee buyers were lowest in all 5 mentioned cities. It can be seen that in the last 4 weeks, the proportions of people went to coffee shop in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart were the most significant, with 61% for Sydney and roughly 63% for Melbourne and Hobart. Turning to instant coffee buying habit, the survey witnessed the top figure in Hobart city with 53%, much higher than the percentages of instant coffee consumers in Sydney and Melbourne (46% and 48% respectively). By contrast, an upward trend was recorded in the proportion of citizens who bought fresh coffee in Sydney with 44% in the last 4 weeks, whereas in Melbourne and Hobart, fresh coffee was a much less famous choice for the people (42% for the former and only 37% for the later). In addition, while a majority of people in Brisbane prefer to go a café (52% according to the result), instant coffee was an ideal coffee option for citizens of Adelaide. Besides, a notable feature is that the rates of fresh coffee buyers in both Brisbane and Adelaide were nearly the same at 34%.

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