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The bar graph gives data about the figure for people expected come from the USA, Canada and Mexico visits 4 different city in 2018.

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The bar graph gives data about the figure for people expected come from the USA, Canada and Mexico visits 4 different city in 2018. Overall, it can be seen that the figure for people expected visits Marid is a hieghest number. The opposite was true for Liverpool in the examined year. Loooking at the chart, it is estimated 100, 000 USA tourists will come Marid, compared with tourists from Canada and Mexico at 80, 000 an 70, 000 number respectivel. By constast, the number of visitors to Liverpool is predicted to be lowest in 2018, stand at 50, 000 USA visitors an double the number of Canada. Also, 80, 000 Americans are estimated to go to Roma in 2018, which is follow by 50, 000 tourists from Canada. And it is 4 times more than as much as visitors from Mexico. The number of 3 city people will come Paris is roughly equal about 60, 000 people.
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IELTS academic The bar graph gives data about the figure for people expected come from the USA, Canada and Mexico visits 4 different city in 2018.

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