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The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who are obese or overweight, the second pie chart shows weight range of adults from 2015

The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults who are obese or overweight, the second pie chart shows weight range of adults from 2015 BwMYa

The provided bar chart gives information about the level of obesity amongst mature people over a 50-year period starting from 1965 while the pie chart reveals the weight range of people over 18 who were healthy or underweight in comparison with those in overweight and obesity in 2015. In general, it is noticeable that the largest ratio of fat citizens was in the year of 2015. Meanwhile, it can be seen from the pie chart that the percentage of people at the alarming weight level was negligible. Proceeding to details, from 1965 through 1985, the proportion of adults who were overweight or obese ranged between 40% and 50%. In the period from 1995 to 2015, there was a stable growth of adults who were overweight or obese increased by a factor of 60 to around 75 percent. Moving on to the second chart, people who were chubby accounted for the largest ratio, at 34%. Meanwhile, overweight individuals ranked second with 31%. This figure was 5 times higher than people who were severely obese with only 6%. A similar pattern could be observed in healthy or underweight people with the quantity of 6%.

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