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the pie chart reveal the top five countries with the highest crime rates of theft & robbery and kidnapping for the year 2013.

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The pie charts provide information, in percentage, regarding the proportion of crime rates of theft, robbery and kidnapping in five different nations during the year 2013. Overall, the majority of crime rates of theft, robbery and kidnapping was observed in Mexico; whereas, Chile had the least rates among all countries. To commence with, the most prominent country having the most kidnapping rate as well as theft and robbery rates was Mexico, as four in ten crimes were of kidnapping while one-third proportion of crime rates belonged to theft and robbery. In addition, the rate of kidnapping, theft and robbery were nearly the same in Spain, that was 16 to 18 percentage in 2013. Furthermore, all these crime rates in Belgium were quite identical to Spain's rates of crime as it was 17%. Moreover, the theft and robbery rates for Belgium were almost half than that of Mexico, however, the kidnapping rate was slightly above one-tenth. Besides this, . the Chile had minimal crime rates for theft, robbery and kidnapping, which were 11% and 15% respectively.
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