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The line chart compares the number of clients per day who is coming to three restaurants, namely Mama’s Café, Good Eats and Tom’s Diner over five-day period from day one to day five. Overall, it is clear that Tom’s Diner has the lowest number of clients in three restaurants. While clients who come to Mama’s Café and Tom’s Diner fluctuates, there is a gradual increase in the number of Good Eats’ clients. In day one, Mama’s Cafe has nearly 200 clients, whereas Good Eats and Tom’s Diner have around 150 and 50 clients respectively. The total clients of Good Eats and Tom’s Diner decline by around 50 people, but the figure for Mama’s Cafe rose by 30 people in the next day. From day 2 to day 5, the number of Tom’s Diner varies consistently and hit a low of approximately no people in day 4. By contrast, Good Eats sees a dramatic growth and reaches the highest point of 220 clients in day 5, the figures for Mama’s Cafe hit a low of 100 clients in day 3 before going up significantly at 240 clients and remain relatively stable from day 4 to day 5.
The line chart compares the
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clients
per day who is coming to three restaurants,
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Mama
’s Café,
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Good
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Eats
and Tom’s
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Diner
over five-day period from day one to day five.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that Tom’s
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Diner
has the lowest
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number
of
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clients
in three restaurants. While
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who
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come
to
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Mama
’s Café and Tom’s
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Diner
fluctuates, there is a gradual increase in the
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number
of
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Good
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Eats’
clients.

In day one,
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Mama
’s
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Cafe
has
nearly
200
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clients
, whereas
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Good
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Eats
and Tom’s
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Diner
have around 150 and 50
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clients
respectively
. The total
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clients
of
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Good
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Eats
and Tom’s
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Diner
decline by around 50
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people
,
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but
the figure for
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’s
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Cafe
rose by 30
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people
in the
next
day.

From day 2 to day 5, the
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number
of Tom’s
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varies
consistently
and hit a low of approximately no
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people
in day 4. By contrast,
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Good
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Eats
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sees
a dramatic growth and reaches the highest point of 220
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clients
in day 5, the figures for
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Mama
’s
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Cafe
hit a low of 100
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clients
in day 3
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before
going up
significantly
at 240
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clients
and remain
relatively
stable from day 4 to day 5.

IELTS academic the chart show the information about the number of customers at three different restaurants during five-day period.

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