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The diagram below show the product life cycle of the car

The diagram below show the product life cycle of the car QlY8K
A superficial look at the pictorial provided reveals data on the serviceable life of the car output. The procedure initiating from conglomerating crude utensils in order to manufacture it to recycling materials and parts. Turning to details, the raw material are accumulated in order to beget the car production and elements are formed. Once this stage is completed, raw factories and materials delivered to factories with the purpose of manufacturing car. When this step is completed, automobiles merchandised basically via dealerships. This is followed by utilization of car on mediocre 3 holders. In the interim, the cars are renovated as well as serviced. At this point, cars sold for scrap. To bring the process to a close the materials and other segments recycled. On the other hand, unrecyclable parts scrapped. Finally, the process repeats itself.
A superficial look at the pictorial provided reveals data on the serviceable life of the
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car
output.

The procedure initiating from conglomerating crude utensils in order to manufacture it to recycling
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materials
and parts.

Turning to
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details
, the raw
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material
are accumulated
in order to beget the
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car
production and elements
are formed
. Once this stage
is completed
, raw factories and
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materials
delivered to factories with the purpose of manufacturing
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car
. When this step
is completed
, automobiles merchandised
basically
via dealerships.

This
is followed
by utilization of
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car
on mediocre 3 holders. In the interim, the
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cars
are renovated
as well
as serviced. At this point,
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cars
sold for scrap. To bring the process to a close the
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materials
and other segments recycled.
On the other hand
,
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unrecyclable
parts scrapped.
Finally
, the process repeats itself.
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