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The pie chart represents the amount of female below the poverty line among different status in society. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of destitution by gender and age in the United States in 2008.

The pie chart represents the amount of female below the poverty line among different status in society. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of destitution by gender and age in the United States in 2008. YkYPV
The pie chart represents the amount of females below the poverty line among different statuses in society. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of destitution by gender and age in the United States in 2008. Overall, it is clear that single females with no dependent children make up the bulk of poverty. Moreover, the percentage of poverty among women of all ages is higher than that of men. However, it is noticeable that with age, the percentage for both genders in poverty declines significantly. Regarding the pie chart, 80% of the total number amounted to single females. However, a considerable number was seen in the section of women without children just above 50%, whereas with children the figure was twice less. In comparison, married women in both sections made up 20 parts of the total number. According to the bar chart, extreme poverty was at the age of under 5 for both gender and the number was equal at slightly above 20%. However, at the group age of 5-17, the rate dropped slightly by 5%. The lowest poverty for women was recorded at 45-54 years, while for men it was 75 and above. The difference in numbers was not significant just only 2%. It is also necessary to highlight that poverty for women in three groups age (18-24, 25-30, and 75-up) were at 5% more than for men.
The pie
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chart
represents the amount of females below the
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poverty
line among
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different
statuses in society. The bar
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chart
illustrates the percentage of destitution by gender and
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age
in the United States in 2008.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that single females with no dependent children
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make
up the bulk of
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poverty
.
Moreover
, the percentage of
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poverty
among
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women
of all
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ages
is higher than that of
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men
.
However
, it is noticeable that with
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age
, the percentage for both genders in
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poverty
declines
significantly
.

Regarding the pie
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chart
, 80% of the total
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number
amounted to single females.
However
, a considerable
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number
was
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seen
in the section of
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women
without children
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just
above 50%, whereas with children the figure was twice less.
In comparison
, married
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women
in both sections made up 20 parts of the total number.

According to the bar
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chart
, extreme
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poverty
was at the
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age
of under 5 for both gender and the
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number
was equal at
slightly
above 20%.
However
, at the group
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age
of 5-17, the rate dropped
slightly
by 5%. The lowest
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poverty
for
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women
was recorded
at 45-54 years, while for
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men
it was 75 and above. The difference in
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numbers
was not significant
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just
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only
2%. It is
also
necessary to highlight that
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poverty
for
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women
in three groups
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age
(18-24, 25-30, and 75-up) were at 5% more than for
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men
.
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IELTS academic The pie chart represents the amount of female below the poverty line among different status in society. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of destitution by gender and age in the United States in 2008.

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