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the figure dropped slightly by around 10 million, which was followed by a recovery to its previous number by the end of the period.

the figure dropped slightly by around 10 million, which was followed by a recovery to its previous number by the end of the period. L3mw6
The graph compares the figure for production of three forest industries in England over a period of 20 years. It can be seen that the production of paper and packaging increased while the opposite was true for sawn-wood. However the wood pulp production slightly remained static. In 1980, the rate for paper and packaging started at around 235 million tonnes which after 10 years its production went up slowly by 15 million. A decade after, the figure for paper and packaging witnessed a considerable growth to 350 million. However after a drastic fall of 50 million, the sawn-wood kept on falling in a slower pace to nearly 125 million in the end of the period. Regarding wood pulp production, the figure dropped slightly by around 10 million, which was followed by a recovery to its previous number by the end of the period.
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of three forest industries in England over a period of 20 years.

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that the
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of paper and packaging increased while the opposite was true for sawn-wood.
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the wood pulp
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remained static.

In 1980, the rate for paper and packaging
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at around 235
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tonnes which after 10 years its
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went up
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by 15
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. A decade after, the figure for paper and packaging witnessed a considerable growth to 350
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.
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after a drastic fall of 50
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, the sawn-wood
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kept
on falling in a slower pace to
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125
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in the
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end
of the period.

Regarding wood pulp
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, the figure dropped
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million
, which
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by a recovery to its previous number by the
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end
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IELTS academic the figure dropped slightly by around 10 million, which was followed by a recovery to its previous number by the end of the period.

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