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The table shows the details of the passengers who used three popular British airports in 1998 and 2003.

The table shows the details of the passengers who used three popular British airports in 1998 and 2003. lXX1o
The table is reflected data about passenger usage of three famous British airports which are Heathrow, Gatwich and Stansted from 1998 to 2003. Overall, Gatwick was the most popular airport at the beginning and also the end meanwhile, others Stansted showed the lowest level almost at the beginning. However, the figures fluctuated widely all over the time period. At first, the highest passenger usage reported in the Gatwick up to 36. 5 millions of travellers per year which was increased idramatically up to 69. 3 and hit the peak point sharply in 2003. After that, Stansted got the level at first on the contrary, it rose significantly 43. 3 millions per year slightly. On the other hand, Heathrow showed 27. 2 passengers count in 1998 and then, grew up noticeably untill 2000. Afterwards, the numbers of visitors dipped unexpectedly up to 37. 1 in next year. Which was followed by another decrease steadily and again reported an enormous growth up to 45. 6 amount of visitors at the end of the time period.
The table
is reflected
data about passenger usage of three
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famous
British airports which are Heathrow,
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Gatwich
and
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Stansted
from 1998 to 2003.

Overall
, Gatwick was the most popular airport at the beginning and
also
the
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end
meanwhile, others
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Stansted
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showed
the lowest level almost at the beginning.
However
, the figures fluctuated
widely
all over the time period.

At
first
, the highest passenger usage reported in the Gatwick up to 36.
Use a singular form of the numeral here: "5 million".
5 millions of
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travellers
per year which
was increased
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idramatically
up to 69. 3 and hit the peak point
sharply
in 2003. After that,
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Stansted
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got
the level at
first
on the contrary
, it rose
significantly
43. 3 millions per year
slightly
.

On the other hand
, Heathrow
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showed
27. 2 passengers count in 1998 and then, grew up
noticeably
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untill
2000. Afterwards, the numbers of visitors dipped
unexpectedly
up to 37. 1 in
next
year. Which
was followed
by another decrease
steadily
and again reported an enormous growth up to 45. 6
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amount
of visitors at the
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end
of the time period.
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IELTS academic The table shows the details of the passengers who used three popular British airports in 1998 and 2003.

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