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the pie chart illustrates the percentage of graduated students joining various employment sectors in 2019 from brighton university.

the pie chart illustrates the percentage of graduated students joining various employment sectors in 2019 from brighton university. d63K

the pie chart illustrates the percentage of graduated students joining various employment sectors in 2019 from brighton university. overall, it can be seen that the service industries benefitted more than any other sector, while sport is the least favourite one among the bachelors. although, the graph is divided into various parts, the service and maufacturing industries combined accounts for just below half of the proportion with 33% associated with former and the latter with 16. 3%. education and politics fields had also considered by the degree holders quite significantly with 14. 7% and 12. 1% respectively. however, there are other sectors which only have single digit figures. 7. 3 graduates take science and technoogy as their career which is quite similar to the transportation and warehousing field with just half a percent more. civil service and other unspecified were being opt by almost 8, 5% combined. while the charity and sport are the least popular career choices of brighton graduates with just. 3% and. 1 % respectively

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