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The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. lEXK
Here the table depicts the salaries of high school teachers in the year 2009. They have mentioned the countries and their salaries in starting, after 15 years, their maximum salaries and how many years it will take to reach maximum salary. The opening salary of Australia is 28000 while for Denmark its 45000, for Luxemburg 80000 which is comparatively much higher then others, Japan 34000 and Korea 30000 being the lowest. After 15 years it will increase to 48000, 54000, 119000, 65000, 48000 respectively. Again Luxembourg being highest paying nation. The maximum salary remain fixed for Australia and Denmark but it will increase for Luxembourg, japan, Korea to 132000, 86000, 62000 respectively. for Australia it will take 9 years to reach the highest savage however for Denmark it will take 8 years. For Luxembourg japan and Korea it will take a lot of years to reach the peak that is 30, 37 and 34 respectively.
Here the table depicts the
salaries
of high school teachers in the
year
2009. They have mentioned the countries and their
salaries
in starting, after 15 years, their maximum
salaries
and how
many
years it will take to reach maximum salary.

The opening
salary
of Australia is 28000 while for Denmark its 45000, for
Luxemburg
80000 which is
comparatively
much
higher then
others, Japan 34000 and Korea 30000 being the lowest.

After 15 years it will increase to 48000, 54000, 119000, 65000, 48000
respectively
. Again Luxembourg being
highest
paying nation.

The maximum
salary
remain
fixed
for Australia and Denmark
but
it will increase for Luxembourg, japan, Korea to 132000, 86000, 62000
respectively
.

for
Australia it
will take 9 years to reach the highest savage
however
for Denmark it will take 8 years. For Luxembourg japan and Korea it will take
a lot of
years to reach the peak
that is
30, 37 and 34
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.

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