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In this analysis we will examine three pie chart. The first one is headed "World Spending", The second is "World Population" and third is "Consumption of Resources" According to the first pie chart, people of the world on an average spent 24% on foods. In clothing, they spent 6% while this percentage is double in housing and triple for Transport. The remaining 40% is the combination of other categories for spending. The second pie chart shows that more than half of the world population live in Asia continent while Europe & America have both only 14% of the total population. One tenth of the world population lives in Africa and rest of 5% people live in other places of thr world. Finally, the third pie chart shows that though that 60% of the world resources are consumed by the population of Usa and Europe though their percentage is only 28% in total. The remaining 40% resources are shared among the rest of the 72% world population of other region of the world. Overall, the resources consumption by the American and European people are dramatically higher comparing to that other countries whereas the higher portion of the population id is distributed is Asian countries
In this analysis we will examine three
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is headed
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World Spending
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, The second is
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World Population
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and third is
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Consumption of Resources
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According to the
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people
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on an average spent 24% on foods. In clothing, they spent 6% while this percentage is double in housing and triple for Transport. The remaining 40% is the combination of
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other
categories for spending. The second
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shows
that more than half of the
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population
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live
in Asia continent while Europe & America have both
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only
14% of the total
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population
. One tenth of the
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population
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in Africa and rest of 5%
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in
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Finally
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that though that 60% of the
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resources
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Usa
and Europe though their percentage is
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28% in total. The remaining 40% resources
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world
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Overall
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consumption by the American and European
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higher comparing to that
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countries whereas the higher portion of the
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id
is distributed
is Asian countries
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5.5
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