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The pie chart illustrates the exports made to India and China from various European countries in 2000 and 2011(in percentages).

The pie chart illustrates the exports made to India and China from various European countries in 2000 and 2011(in percentages). XDowN
The pie chart illustrates the exports made to India and China from various European countries in 2000 and 2011(in percentages). At first glance it is clear that the largest exports in China were from Germany in both 2000 and 2011, the rest of the countries had small export shares to China, like the United Kingdom, Sweden, Spain, France, Finland and others which stayed between the stretch of 2-15% in 2000 and 2011. Whereas, in India the largest exports in 2000 came from the United Kingdom and Belgium, rest of the countries were Germany, Italy, Austria, Finland and others which similarly stayed between the stretch of 2-20% in 2000 and 2011 almost alike China. In 2011 Germany got the largest hold of exports to India covering 25% and the exports from Belgium and the United Kingdom dramatically decreased from 25% and 29% to 20% and 13%. However, the proportions of exports between China and India were almost very close, leaving Germany, Belgium and the United Kingdom.
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made to India and China from various European countries in 2000 and 2011(in percentages).

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that the largest
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in China were from Germany in both 2000 and 2011, the rest of the countries had
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shares to China, like the
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Kingdom, Sweden, Spain, France, Finland
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and others
which stayed between the stretch of 2-15% in 2000 and 2011.

Whereas, in India the largest
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in 2000 came from the
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Kingdom and Belgium, rest of the countries were Germany, Italy, Austria, Finland
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and others
which
similarly
stayed between the stretch of 2-20% in 2000 and 2011 almost alike China. In 2011 Germany
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the largest hold of
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to India covering 25% and the
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from Belgium and the
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United
Kingdom
dramatically
decreased from 25% and 29% to 20% and 13%.

However
, the proportions of
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between China and India were almost
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close, leaving Germany, Belgium and the
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Kingdom.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the exports made to India and China from various European countries in 2000 and 2011(in percentages).

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