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the diagram below show the power of water is used to generate electricity.

the diagram below show the power of water is used to generate electricity. drDEp

The process illustrates the generating electricity using water in a hydroelectric plant. According to the given diagram, the process begins with the water flow collected in a reservoir using a sluice gate and passed through an intake structure onto a dam. After that, water is falling into a dam and flows down through a sluice gate to a turbine. In the second stage, falling water is flowing at high speed to flow onto the turbine, which is spinning. Turbine connected to a generator, which converts spin energy to current. The power is measured into the voltage. All the processes are done in the power plant. The final stage is voltage delivered to all places via a transformer, which is connected to the transmission line. The transformer used to reduce the voltage is approximately 220-240 V. Overall, this is a fluent process that can start with trapping water and end with the generating voltage using a hydroelectric plant, and after that, transfer current to each destination.

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