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The pie chart illustrates most important reasons behind the less usage of the agricultural land,while table provides the information of the places,which were badly affected by these reasons.

The pie chart illustrates most important reasons behind the less usage of the agricultural land, while table provides the information of the places, which were badly affected by these reasons. xaJ5g
The pie chart illustrates most important reasons behind the less usage of the agricultural land, while table provides the information of the places, which were badly affected by these reasons. The data has been calibrated in percentage only. Overall, overgrazing and deforestation are one of the most common causes behind the land degradation. On the other hand, Europe was one of the most affected region by land degradation. It is quite clear from the pie chart that overgrazing and deforestation were one of the main source of land degradation by 35% and 30% respectively. In addition, over-cultivation contributed by 28% only. On the contrary, it was seen other reasons also by 7%. Whereas, in the table, it has been found that over-cultivation was one of the major problem, which affected land by 3. 3%, while in Europe, deforestation was one of the biggest problem behind land degradation by 9. 8%. Besides that, in Oceania, overgrazing was one of the strong reason behind less production of land affected by 11. 3% area of the region.
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by 3. 3%, while in Europe, deforestation was one of the biggest problem behind
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degradation by 9. 8%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates most important reasons behind the less usage of the agricultural land, while table provides the information of the places, which were badly affected by these reasons.

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