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The pie chart illustrates important reasons of agricultural land becoming less useful. The table explains the various causes that affected different regions of the world in 1990s. In light to the pie chart, it depicts worldwide land degradation causes wherein the maximum part is of over-grazing with 35%, followed by deforestation, the second last is due to over-cultivation and lastly because of other reasons. The table shows land degradation by region causes, the maximum total land degraded is in North America, which is 23%, whereas the least can be seen in the north America region, which is 5% and the middle region stands to 13% which is Europe. Overall the two charts, discuss the main causes of land degradation worldwide and region wise also focusing on the four main reasons of land degradation that are firstly, over-grazing, secondly, over-cultivation, thirdly, deforestation and lastly due to various other reasons.

The graph illustrates different persons visiting cinemas on weekdays and weekends in a European nation. It concentrates on three years which are 2003, 2005 and 2007. On comparing the weekends for the three years the highest peak is seen on saturdays which is 40% for 2003, 45% for 2005 and around 43% for 2007 whereas on sundays the people visiting cinemas is declining for all years it is 30% for 2003, amost 35% for 2005 and nearly 32% for 2007. Looking at fridays it stands equal (30%). While on weekdays the lowest percentage for the year 2003 can be seen on mondays on the other hand the highest (almost 25%) is on thursdays. For 2005 the maximum is on tuesdays (around 17%) and the other three days stand almost equivalent to each other. In 2007 the highest is for thrusdays and tuesdays (17%) whereas the lowest is on wednesdays (approximately 10%)
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the highest (almost 25%) is on thursdays. For 2005 the maximum is on tuesdays (around 17%) and the other three days stand almost equivalent to each other. In 2007 the highest is for thrusdays and tuesdays (17%) whereas the lowest is on wednesdays (approximately 10%)

IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates important reasons of agricultural land becoming less useful. The table explains the various causes that affected different regions of the world in 1990s. In light to the pie chart, it depicts worldwide land degradation causes wherein the maximum part is of over-grazing with 35%, followed by deforestation, the second last is due to over-cultivation and lastly because of other reasons. The table shows land degradation by region causes, the maximum total land degraded is in North America, which is 23%, whereas the least can be seen in the north America region, which is 5% and the middle region stands to 13% which is Europe. Overall the two charts, discuss the main causes of land degradation worldwide and region wise also focusing on the four main reasons of land degradation that are firstly, over-grazing, secondly, over-cultivation, thirdly, deforestation and lastly due to various other reasons.

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  • The pie chart illustrates important reasons of agricultural land becoming less useful. The table explains the various causes that affected different regions of the world in 1990s. In light to the pie chart, it depicts worldwide land degradation causes wherein the maximum part is of over-grazing with 35%, followed by deforestation, the second last is due to over-cultivation and lastly because of other reasons. The table shows land degradation by region causes, the maximum total land degraded is in North America, which is 23%, whereas the least can be seen in the north America region, which is 5% and the middle region stands to 13% which is Europe. Overall the two charts, discuss the main causes of land degradation worldwide and region wise also focusing on the four main reasons of land degradation that are firstly, over-grazing, secondly, over-cultivation, thirdly, deforestation and lastly due to various other reasons.