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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the number of passengers travelling by London Underground Station starting from 6am till 10pm in a day. Overall, there are two most preferred time slots at 8am and 6pm during the day. The day starts with lowest number of passengers(100) at 6am. Thereafter, the number of people travelling increases to 200 at 7am and reaches peak(400) at 8am. A dimishing trend is observed after 8am till 10am as from 400 passengers the count deacreses to 300 at 9am and then, less than 200 at 10am. There is a slight rise after 10am till noon the number rise to more than 250 passengers. Although, a constant count of travellers around 300 is observed from noon till 2pm. The number again starts to fall and follow same trend till 4pm with 100 passengers travelling. However, the surge is seen again which reaches the highest number of commuters 400 at 6pm followed by declining trend. The entire day, observes a zigzag trend with least number of individuals travelling being 100 and highest (400). The rush hours are at 8am and 6pm. Whereas, the least travelled are 6am, 6pm amd after 8pm.
The line graph illustrates the
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passengers
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travelling
by London Underground Station starting from 6am till 10pm in a day.
Overall
, there are two most preferred time slots at 8am and 6pm during the day.

The day
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starts
with lowest
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number
of
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passengers(100)
at 6am. Thereafter, the
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number
of
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people
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travelling
increases to 200 at 7am and reaches peak(400) at 8am. A dimishing trend
is observed
after 8am till 10am as from 400
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passengers
the count deacreses to 300 at 9am and then, less than 200 at 10am. There is a slight rise after 10am till noon the
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number
rise to more than 250 passengers.

Although, a constant count of travellers around 300
is observed
from noon till 2pm. The
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number
again
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starts
to fall and follow same trend till 4pm with 100
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passengers
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travelling
.
However
, the surge is
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again which reaches the highest
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number
of commuters 400 at 6pm followed by declining trend.

The entire day, observes a zigzag trend with least
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of individuals
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travelling
being 100 and highest (400). The rush hours are at 8am and 6pm. Whereas, the least travelled are 6am, 6pm amd after 8pm.

IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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