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The table and chart below shows the time spend at leisure activities in Britain

The blend of tabular chart and horizontal bar graph illustrates the information about the amount of time spent on various activities by both genders in a particular nation. Overall, the majority of females spend time on household works; however, the males spend maximum time on leisure activities. Both sexes showed 19 % minutes are spent on reading. 15 minutes are spent by men on sports, whereas only 11 minutes are spent by women on same activity. The time spent by females on t. v, videos and radio are more than men at 118 minutes and 99 respectively. Moving further, in Britain, the males 10 mintues time are spend on washing clothes and ironing, whilst the females allocate highest amount of time on cooking and washing. 20 minutes are spent by males in shopping and repair works, but double fold time is spent by females in shopping.
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on various activities by both genders in a particular nation.

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spend
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on household works;
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on leisure activities.

Both sexes
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19 % minutes are
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on reading. 15 minutes are
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by women on same activity. The
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on cooking and washing. 20 minutes are
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IELTS academic The table and chart below shows the time spend at leisure activities in Britain

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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