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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph depicts number of London Underground Station passengers travelling at different time of the day. The number of individuals commuting are varying according to the time. Around 150 people prefer the time between 20: 00 p. m to 22: 00 p. m. Further it is seen that approximately 200 people preferthe timings 7: 00 a. m, 10: 00 a. m, 11: 00 a. m, 15: 00 p. m and 17: 00 p. m. Another rushing hours are 9: 30 a. m, 12: 00 noon, 13: 00 p. m, 14: 30 p. m and 19: 00 p. m. with 300 passengers making there way in and out of the station. The second highest carring passengers time is 18: 00 p. m with almost 375 people. Overall, the peak can be see at 7: 30 a. m with exactly 400 people and the least is at two times in a day which are 6: 00 a. m and 16: 30 p. m with 100 people. Whereas for other time of the day the number of passengers remain almost constant in different time periods.
The line graph depicts number of London Underground Station
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travelling at
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of the day.

The number of individuals commuting are varying according to the
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. Around 150
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prefer the
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between 20: 00 p. m to 22: 00 p. m.
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that approximately 200
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preferthe timings 7: 00 a. m, 10: 00 a. m, 11: 00 a. m, 15: 00 p. m and 17: 00 p. m. Another rushing hours are 9: 30 a. m, 12: 00 noon, 13: 00 p. m, 14: 30 p. m and 19: 00 p. m. with 300
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making there way in and out of the station. The second highest carring
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is 18: 00 p. m with almost 375
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.

Overall
, the peak can be
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at 7: 30 a. m with exactly 400
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and the least is at two
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in a day which are 6: 00 a. m and 16: 30 p. m with 100
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. Whereas for other
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of the day the number of
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remain almost constant in
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periods.

IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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