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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The given chart illustrates statistics about GDP from IT and service industry of UK in percentage over the period from 1992 to 2000. It is clear from the chart that IT industry maintained its dominance during the given period in UK. Turning to the details, being just over 6% in 1992, IT industry experienced a significant increase over the shown period, except 1996 comprising for just under 8%. It was followed by a remarkable growth in 1998 and 2000 accounting for 12% and more than 14% respectively. Meanwhile, being in its lowest point, making up 4% in 1992, service industry gradually went up to around 6% in 1994 and it was followed by a slight rise in 1996 and 1998. Lastly, touching its highest point the amount of GDP from service industry doubled over the provided period, constituting for just over 8% in 2000.
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chart illustrates statistics about GDP from IT and service
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industry
of UK in percentage
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over
the
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period
from 1992 to 2000. It is
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clear
from the chart that IT
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industry
maintained its dominance during the
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period
in UK.

Turning to the
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, being
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over
6% in 1992, IT
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industry
experienced a significant increase
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over
the shown
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period
, except 1996 comprising for
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just
under 8%. It
was followed
by a remarkable growth in 1998 and 2000 accounting for 12% and more than 14%
respectively
.

Meanwhile, being in its lowest point, making up 4% in 1992, service
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industry
gradually
went up to around 6% in 1994 and it
was followed
by a slight rise in 1996 and 1998.
Lastly
, touching its highest point the amount of GDP from service
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industry
doubled
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over
the provided
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period
, constituting for
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just
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8% in 2000.

IELTS academic The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

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