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The table and chart below shows the time spend at leisure activities in Britain

The blend of tabular chart and horizontal bar graph illustrates the information about the amount of time spent on various activities by both genders in a particular nation. Overall, the majority of females spend time on household works; however, the males spend maximum time on leisure activities. Both sexes showed 19 % mintues are spent on reading. 15 minutes are spent by men on sports, whereas only 11 minutes are spent by women on same activity.
The blend of tabular chart and horizontal bar graph illustrates the information about the amount of time
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on various activities by both genders in a particular nation.

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, the majority of females spend time on household works;
however
, the males spend maximum time on leisure activities.

Both sexes
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on reading. 15 minutes are
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on sports, whereas
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by women on same activity.

IELTS academic The table and chart below shows the time spend at leisure activities in Britain

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