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The chart below shows the percentage of young people at a university in 2000 and 2007 .summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph compares the proportion of yong people who were study in Italy, Spain, UK, Poland, Norway and Finland universities in the years 2000 and 2007. Overall, in the first year mutures was mostly preferred to Finland university, whereas less proportion which were preferred to Spain university. At a fleeting glance, students showed 70% who were studying in Finland university in both years. The percentage of scholars in 2000 and 2007 were akin to each other in Norway university. In 2000 and 2007, the ratio of Polish learners was more than UK universities scholars at 78%and 46%, respectively.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
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in the years 2000 and 2007.

Overall
, in the
first
year
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mutures
was
mostly
preferred to Finland
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university
, whereas less proportion which
were preferred
to Spain university.

At a fleeting glance, students
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showed
70% who were studying in Finland
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university
in both years. The percentage of scholars in 2000 and 2007 were akin to each other in Norway
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
. In 2000 and 2007, the ratio of Polish learners was more than UK
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
scholars at 78%and 46%,
respectively
.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of young people at a university in 2000 and 2007.

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