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the pie chart gives statistics on the lifetime of the public of Yemen and Italy in 2000 plus future prediction for 2050.

the pie chart gives statistics on the lifetime of the public of Yemen and Italy in 2000 plus future prediction for 2050. m38n1

the pie chart gives statistics on the lifetime of the public of Yemen and Italy in 2000 plus future prediction for 2050. Overall, Yemen in 2000, the proportion of ages between 0-14 years had by far the greatest, including in upcoming years the lifetime of 15-59 would be increased, whilst in Italy, folks between 15-59 age was highest in 2000 and would follow the same pattern in final year as well. In terms of Yemen, nearly half of the proportion can be witnesses of the children in 2000, which would decrease by 37% in 2050. Moreover, the ages between 15-59 years was 46. 3% and it would rose by proximally two-third according to projection for 2050. Furthermore, other ages in Yemen shows just a small fraction in both years. On the other hand in Italy, the population length of life between 15059 years was about three quarters in 2000, which would be minimized by no more or less 46. 2%, the most striking feature of other ages is both of the years approximately 24% in 2000 which would be double in future. Whereas, the percentage of pupils was about fourteen percent in 2000

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 pie chart gives statistics on the lifetime of the public of Yemen and Italy in 2000 plus future prediction for 2050.

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age
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In terms of Yemen, nearly
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On the other hand
 in Italy, the population length of life between 15059 years was about three quarters in 2000, which would be minimized
 by no more or less 46. 2%, the most striking feature of other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
 is both of the years approximately 24% in 2000 which would be double Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
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, the percentage of pupils was about fourteen percent in 2000