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THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW THE ELECTRICITY IS GENRATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. SUMMARSE THE INOFRMATION BY SELCTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW THE ELECTRICITY IS GENRATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. SUMMARSE THE INOFRMATION BY SELCTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT. XlBNY
THE DIAGRAMS ILLUSRATES THE PROCESS OF PRODUCING ELECTRICITY FROM WATER IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. OVERALL, THE POWER STATION PLAYS AN ESSENTIAL ROLE AS GENERATOR WORK DIFFERENT ACCORING TO DAY AND NIGHT. DAM WORK AS FENCE FOR THE FLOW OF HYDROGEN. IT CAN CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE WATER FROM RIVER STORED IN A HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR AND THE FLOW OF HYDRO CONTROLLED BY DAM. IN DAY TIME, THE WATER FLOWS FROM FENCES TO REVERSIBLE TURBINES. THE TUBINES SEND WATER IN A LOW-LEVEL STORAGE AND PRODUCED ELECTRICITY SENT TO GENERATOR. FINALLY, GENERATORS TRANSFERS THESE ENERGY TO NATIONAL GRIDS BY POWER LINES. IN NIGHT TIME, THE FUNCTION OF REVERSIBLE TURBINES PUMPS WATER FROM BELOW STORING LEVEL TO DAM. THE DAMS OPEN IN NIGHT FOR INTAKE OF WATER HOWEVER, IT CLOSED IN DAY TIME.
THE DIAGRAMS
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ILLUSRATES
THE PROCESS OF PRODUCING ELECTRICITY FROM
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WATER
IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION.

OVERALL
, THE POWER STATION PLAYS AN ESSENTIAL ROLE AS GENERATOR WORK
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DIFFERENT
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ACCORING
TO DAY AND NIGHT.
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DAM
WORK AS FENCE FOR THE FLOW OF HYDROGEN.

IT CAN
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE
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WATER
FROM RIVER STORED IN A HIGH-LEVEL RESERVOIR AND THE FLOW OF HYDRO CONTROLLED BY
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DAM
. IN DAY TIME, THE
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WATER
FLOWS FROM FENCES TO REVERSIBLE TURBINES. THE
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TUBINES
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SEND
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WATER
IN A LOW-LEVEL STORAGE AND PRODUCED ELECTRICITY
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SENT
TO GENERATOR.
FINALLY
, GENERATORS TRANSFERS
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THESE ENERGY
TO NATIONAL GRIDS BY POWER LINES.

IN NIGHT TIME, THE FUNCTION OF REVERSIBLE TURBINES PUMPS
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WATER
FROM BELOW STORING LEVEL TO
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DAM
. THE
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DAMS
OPEN IN NIGHT FOR INTAKE OF
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WATER
HOWEVER
, IT CLOSED IN DAY TIME.

IELTS academic THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS HOW THE ELECTRICITY IS GENRATED IN A HYDROELECTRIC POWER STATION. SUMMARSE THE INOFRMATION BY SELCTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES, AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

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