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The bar chart illustrates the average students per class in primary schools and junior schools in six different conutries in comparasion with the globle average in 2006.

The bar chart illustrates the average students per class in primary schools and junior schools in six different conutries in comparasion with the globle average in 2006. 73joy
The bar chart illustrates the average students per class in primary schools and junior schools in six different conutries in comparasion with the globle average in 2006. Overall, South Korea had the highest number of students on average in the both categories, while the smallest number of students in primary school was Iceland; lower secondary, in UK South Korea was larger class size in lower secondary schools than the other ones, at 36 and 34 respectively. That was followed by Japan with 34 for the former and 29 for the latter which were both higher than the world average. By constract, exactly 30 was recored for the first in Mexico; 20 for the second – gradually lower in compared to the globle. Almost the remaining countries had smaller size of class than the globle. To be specific, there was over 25 students on average in primary school in the UK as opposed to about 17 students per class in junior schools. Denmark and Iceland had the similar patern accounting for around 22 to 20 students in the both categories.
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