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The pie chart compare and contrast percentages of news access in two different countries, Canada and Australia in the same year.

The pie chart compare and contrast percentages of news access in two different countries, Canada and Australia in the same year. KlY21
The pie chart compare and contrast percentages of news access in two different countries, Canada and Australia in the same year. Overall, a clear look at the charts highlights the fact that the habitant in both countries spend the largest proportion of their time on onlines and TV, while the percentage of Not specified is the lowest. Looking at the pie charts in the more detail, the rate of online news reading in Australia is the highest with 52%, while the figure for Canada is 36%. In Canada, the TV news access index is 40%, which is 3% higher than in Australia. Regarding the remaining categories, in Australia, the figure for print is 7%, half of what it is in Canada. Radio and Not specified news access rates are 7 percent and 3%, respectively, in Australia, while the index for both is 2%.
The pie chart compare and contrast percentages of
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countries, Canada and Australia in the same year.

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and TV, while the percentage of Not specified is the lowest.

Looking at the pie charts in the more detail, the rate of online
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reading in Australia is the highest with 52%, while the figure for Canada is 36%. In Canada, the TV
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access index is 40%, which is 3% higher than in Australia.

Regarding the remaining categories, in Australia, the figure for print is 7%, half of what it is in Canada. Radio and Not specified
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access rates are 7 percent and 3%,
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, in Australia, while the index for both is 2%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart compare and contrast percentages of news access in two different countries, Canada and Australia in the same year.

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