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The pie chart belows show the causes of world wide global warming and the table shows the percentage of CO2 by causes of three continents.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie chart belows show the causes of world wide global warming and the table shows the percentage of CO2 by causes of three continents. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 1Vw9W
The line graph gives the information of the monthly temperature and the amount of hours sunshine provided annually in three different cities. In January, the highest temperature nearly 25 degree Celsius is detected in Sydney contrast, both London and New York's temperature is under 7 degree Celsius. There is a sharp difference for all cities exactly in July. The temperature of Sydney dramatically goes down approximately to 15, while the others' reach respectively to the peak of 23 and 30. The figure for Sydney goes back to 25, whilst the temperature of two cities are reaching to the lowest point at the end of the month. New York is by far the most important means of sunlight receiving annually 2, 535 whilst Sydney and London get 2, 473 and 1, 18, each. In general, although New York is getting the greatest amount of sunlight per year, Sydney is hotter than those other two cities, London and New York over the span of a year.
The line graph gives the information of the monthly
temperature
and the amount of hours sunshine provided
annually
in three
different
cities.

In January, the highest
temperature
nearly
25 degree Celsius
is detected
in Sydney contrast, both London and
New
York's
temperature
is under 7 degree Celsius. There is a sharp difference for all cities exactly in July. The
temperature
of Sydney
dramatically
goes down approximately to 15, while the others' reach
respectively
to the peak of 23 and 30.

The figure for Sydney goes back to 25, whilst the
temperature
of two cities are reaching to the lowest point at the
end
of the month.
New
York is by far the most
important
means of sunlight receiving
annually
2, 535 whilst Sydney and London
get
2, 473 and 1, 18, each.

In general
, although
New
York is getting the greatest amount of sunlight per year, Sydney is hotter than those other two cities, London and
New
York over the span of a year.
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IELTS academic The pie chart belows show the causes of world wide global warming and the table shows the percentage of CO2 by causes of three continents. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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164 words
6.5
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