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The pie chart below shows the result of questioning asking visitors in Luton airport how they rated the overall service.

The pie chart below shows the result of questioning asking visitors in Luton airport how they rated the overall service. BaBG9
The pie charts provided two different period 2015 as well as 2010 into Luton airport to tourism answering the questions about how was the service along with. In detail, service of Luton airport during the year of 2005 the satisfaction individuals 45 percentum On contrast, 21 percentage of customers was in poor rated. Moreover, airport of Lipton services in very poor and good was in approximately equal proportion which was 15% and 14 percentile respectively. Furthermore, significant percentage of excellent customers in 2005. On the other hand, in 10th decade visiters was increased then the 2005 it was arrived at 28 percentile in excellent service with this, good rated people was also rise on two forth. Next, satisfactory tourists was 17 percentage which was 5 percentile more than who are interested. Additionally, only 4% team was in very poor rated in Luton airport service. Overall, it is clearly witnessed that, it was vast change in both years, in 2010, service of airport Luton was amazing.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the result of questioning asking visitors in Luton airport how they rated the overall service.

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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