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The line graph below shows annual salea of motor bikes in respect of manufactures in India.

The line graph below shows annual salea of motor bikes in respect of manufactures in India. xDKgo

The graph illustrates the annual bike sales of four manufactures in India supply from 2011-2014. Overall, it is clear that Hero Corpa was the highest in all the period of time and the Hero Honda was the lowest in the beginning but later on it reach the second highest product at the end. In the year 2011, annual sales of Hero Corpa was over 4 lakh units. The second highest in the line was Bajaj Auto, with around 225, 000 units sold followed by TVS and HM with annual sales of approximately180 and 130 thousand units, respectively. While, the sales of HMwas lower in the starting but it showed a upward trend in all the time period and other three companies have flucated. Futhermore, Bajaj Auto has suffered a net loss in sales from 225 thousand units to approximately 190, 000 unit. Moreover, TVS has shown an impressive gain from 180 to roughly 265, 000units, inbetween TVS suffered q drop in sales during 2012-2013.

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